Thursday, August 5

Broken. Part #3/3

This post is the second part of a Three-piece story. For those who wish to read it, Its highly recommended you through the first part of the story. Click here and the second part, click here. And the ones who have already done it, Please proceed. For your kind consideration - 


7 Hours later, a Park near Brigade road, Bangalore /6:28PM :


He tried hard to beat sleep. Maybe this time he succeeded. Three sleeping pills at a shot ain't any joke. Kurt Cobain had succumbed to an overdose of four pills. Marilyn Monroe, just two.
He sat on the park bench, chronicling the events of the day. Of how he managed to fly down from BBSR to BLURU, passed two security checks, changed two buses here with his backpack still on his shoulders, all when he was half asleep through the time.
Nidhi always used to talk about this place. She lived nearby and used to frequent here whenever she was in town. It was even more beautiful than what Nidhi used to talk about. Reminded him of Notting Hill, Hugh Grant and Julia Roberts on a park bench.
Yes, this place has beautiful parks and beautiful girls too. Beautiful enough to kill you, nearly kill you.


"Hay-lou!!", a dusky feminine voice said as Suresh sat with his eyes half closed, lost in thoughts of the one who was standing in front of him and had just said him 'Hi'.
He found it hard to stand up.
"Sit down. was jus' thinking of you. Sau Saal jeeyegi tu."
She said nothing but smiled. Their eyes met for a moment until she glanced away out of utter shyness the next moment.


S: "Guess what? i just nearly killed myself to get to you. Hope it does something good."
N: " Why you sayin' that to me? I'm least bothered."


And they kissed passionately.
And when the next moment they hugged, something scarlet dripped down from Suresh's nostrils and stained Nidhi's Ashen white jacket near her right shoulder.
Blood.


"Everything got into place, just in time", he thought.


AFTER FIGHTING FOR HIS LIFE FOR 34 HOURS IN A BANGALORE HOSPITAL, THE DOCTORS ANNOUNCED SURESH DEAD.
ACCORDING TO THE AUTOPSY REPORTS, THE REASON OF HIS DEATH WAS STATED TO BE "OVERDOSE OF DRUGS LEADING TO A CONSEQUENT CARDIAC ARREST DUE TO A LOW BLOOD PRESSURE."

4 comments:

Sneha said...

hmmm nice.but the end could have been better.not different from what has been written ,just better.as in it could have been elaborate a bit longer.the story ends too abruptly.but still nicely written.:)

Sampad Acharya said...

Thanks v much Sneha.

This is actually the final part of actual atory which i had written in 3 installments.
Here are the first two-

http://rebelpoet.blogspot.com/2010/05/broken-part-13.html

http://rebelpoet.blogspot.com/2010/06/broken-part-23.html

keep reading & Enjoy :)

Sampad Acharya said...

That was story

My mistake, sorry (:

Sneha said...

i have read the earlier two parts.or else i wldnt have been able to mke head or tail of this one.n thats also the reason i feel the end was too abrupt.like the shocking factor was missing.just a observation!!:).i liked the story a lot though.